There are many types of videomgames, but war games
and sports games are the most popular around the world, however, these have some
differences. Sports games usually use a ball as its main item, so you can
control the character with the ball. In addition, most of the characters that
you control in this type of videogames are based in the real character. On the
other hand, war games usually use a gun as its main item, so you can control
only one character the one that the game assign you. Most of the characters that
you use in this type of game are based on fiction, they don’t exist in the real
life. Although these two types of videogames have some differences, you can enjoy them in the same way.
There are many types of videogames, but war games and sports games are the most popular around the world, however these have some differences. Sports games usually use a ball as its main item, so you can control the character with the ball. In addition most of the characters that you control in this type of videogames are based in the real character. On the other hand war games usually use a gun as its main item, so you can control only one character the one that the game assign you. Most of the character that you use in this type of game are based on fiction, they don’t exist in the real life. Although these two types of videogames have some differences they enjoy you in the same way.
ResponderEliminar-Spelling: "videogames" instead of "video games".
-Punctuation: Use commas after some transition words, "however these have..." instead of "however, these have...", "In addition most of the..." instead of "In addition, most of the...", "On the other hand war games..." instead of "On the other hand, war games..."...one character the one that" instead of "...one character, the one that..."
-Grammar: subject-verb agreement " Most of the character are based..." instead of "Most of the character is based or Most of the characters are based...". Use of "the", "...they don't exist in the real..." instead of "they don't exist in real life". Coherence, "Although these two types of video games have some differences they enjoy you in the same way." instead of "Although these two types of video games have some differences you can enjoy them the same way."