sábado, 17 de octubre de 2015

Overpopulation in government´s hands

Overpopulation is created by the three following problems: the lack of good education, Lack of Laws and lack of family planning. Overpopulation is a big problem because this problem is causing less opportunities to people, when they want to get a job or be part of a company. Also, overpopulation is causing deforestation because men are cutting trees in order to make houses to the people. The government in every country needs to control the over population in order to avoid this problem. If population continue growing, we are can cause a lot of damage to our world.
The government has two solutions to avoid the overpopulation in a close future. The first solution is to strengthen the sexual education in every educational institutions, it could a good solution because when the kids grow up they will know how to protect themselves in order to avoid unplanned pregnancies. The second solution that the government might follow is to create a new law, which restricts the number of children that a couple can have according to their economic income. If the government apply these to solution they could avoid the overpopulation in our world and also avoid the damage to our country.


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  1. Overpopulation is created by the three following problems: the lack of good education, Lack of Laws and lack of family planning. Overpopulation is a big problem because this problem is causing less opportunities to people, when they want to get a job or be part of a company. Also, overpopulation is causing deforestation because men are cutting trees in order to make houses to people. The government in every country needs to control the over population in order to avoid this problem. If population continues to grow, we can cause a lot of damage to our world.

    The government has two solutions to avoid the overpopulation in a close future. The first solution is to strengthen sexual education in every educational institutions. It could be a good solution because when kids grow up they will know how to protect themselves in order to avoid unplanned pregnancies. The second solution that the government might follow is to create a new law, which restricts the number of children that a couple can have according to their economic income. If the government applies these solutions they could avoid the overpopulation in our world and also avoid the damage to our country.

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    https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/540/01/

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    The structure is really good, though.

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