Virtual books and paper books both have advantages
for a students. Virtual books are really easy to find, you can enter the name
of the book in the web and you will find it in some minutes. Virtual books also
are easy to carry, you can download them in you cellphone, laptop, memory card and
you can read it everywhere. Another advantage of virtual books is that virtual book don't required papers for the pages like paper books. On the other hand, there are also advantages in paper books. You
can re-sell them to second-hand bookstores, or you can sell to another person. Also
the paper books don’t cause damage to the sight of the reader, because you don’t
need to be in from of a screen. Finally, the paper books are easy to focus in
the reading because you don’t have many distraction like in a technological device.
To concluded, I can say that both of them are good and have some advantages
but it will depend on the readers.
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ResponderEliminarVirtual books and paper books both have advantages for a students. Virtual books are really easy to find, you can enter the name of the book in the web and you will find it in a minutes. Virtual books also are easy to carry, you can download in you cellphone, laptop, memory card and you can read it everywhere. Another advantage is that virtual books is that no trees are required to manufacture paper (for the pages of eBooks... this information is not needed). On the other hand there are also advantages in paper books. You can re-sell them to second-hand bookstores, or you can sell to another person. Also the paper books don’t cause damage to the sight of the reader, because you don’t need to be in from of a screen. Finally, the paper books are easy to focus in the reading because you don’t have many distraction like in a technological device. To concluded, I can said that both of them are good and have some advantages but it will depend on the readers.
ResponderEliminar-Grammar: "find it in a minutes" (plural, doesn't need the "a"), "you can download in you cellphone..." instead of "you can download them in your cellphone...", "another advantage is that virtual books is that..." instead of "... is that virtual books don't require paper.", Use of "the" like "Also, the paper books" instead of "Also, paper books...", "to concluded" instead of "to conclude", "I can said" instead of "I can say"
-Punctuation: use commas after some transition words "On the other hand,", "Also,"
Typos: "from" instead of "front".